Goal was to connect to the story we were reading in class.
I’ve got a happy life living on a farm away from noises and city lights. I have a little sister and twin brothers, four kids. I research flowers and plants, I also find bugs and insects and put them in jars. But every happy story never stays one. One day my father was grabbing all the vegetables and fruits, but he fell in mid-air. My family rushed towards him, I was shaking half to death. The ambulance came and picked him up. When he was back all of a sudden he was gone forever.
‘’ Why’d he have to leave us’’ I said silently in tears.
Prompt: when all of a sudden
I’m running free from laughing children who sit there bums on my body. My life goes round in a circle with no corners or turns not even a bend. All pretty and glam I look fit for riding but am I really just a toy. What if my life is a vivid unclear dream? Drawn to light which my mane shines in, dragged away from a life with one possibility. Eyes widened so a little imagination would set me free. If life as a statue is what you want I’m free for interview sessions, just for free and yes now.
I’m a weather journalist and if any crazy happens I faint but then I miss it. I love going round the world seeing what’s going to happen each day. I had crashed my plane a few months ago, I’m not sure why I thought I could fly a plane. It was like land were in every corner was a different season. I went to a lake and got some fresh water, THE WEATHER CHANGED DRAMATICALLY!! The snow was tumbling down the hill and the sun shone over, the snow pushed me strong and the sun bravely caused everything to melt.
Hey guys have you ever seen a chicken lay an egg like this? Well we live in the veggie patch with fruits and veggies and were sick of being healthy. We built a whole empire, and you know how I found the egg. Well we were building the statue of Puberty, and from the top I spotted a treat. So we weren’t supposed to leave the city walls but we had to. We cracked the top and started floating out. We took a little flick and then a lick. As we the tasted this treasure, Ahhhhhhhhhh a girl grabbed us.
Both 100 words
Well how amazing, how pressuring is it when there could be a life in danger, and you can’t see properly and the mother doesn’t know what’s happening? How old are you and where did you study? How did you get into it did someone show you or family did it or friends or did you watch a video? Do you ever get scared when you don’t have the equipment or tools and there is something wrong and you can’t do that much, and then you have to rush to hospital? Do you feel lonely away from your family?
Here’s how I interpret it,
In the dead of night sleeping, woken up by the ringing tone of the phone. You rush up fall and grab the phone with a tight grasp. You here there’s someone coming and people rush in with a woman on a stretcher. You look at her face and tell it’s going to be all right. Looking around finding what you have in store when you don’t have vital tools and equipment. You think in your brain using your knowledge and find what’s wrong you use only a stethoscope and see the problem. You say what’s wrong and bring them to satisfaction.
My goal is to be less descriptive.
I’ve been living in the outback and I’m a tale no legend as old as the dreamtime. I been surviving on what Mother Nature’s been giving me. I eat the animals that step in the red plains each morn. And I live out of grasses, leaves, bark and branches bundled over each other. But one day as I travelled down the pebbled track I walked down the current of where the water flowed each day and night. But it was empty and my skills were dying off. If animals died I couldn’t survive, wait the water kept gushing out, ‘’It’s back’’ I cried.
My goal was to do a poem, but a short sentence like a storybook at the end.
Lightning flashes and flickers like sparks of fireworks. It’s like a big light show festival but with danger and distress. It comes in different shapes and sizes and tries to attack the best. Lightning never comes without a friend, his good old mate thunder. In the flash of lightning I saw something like a shadow, in the dark and that’s what happens when lightning is around. Lightning and thunder are like subway without one ingredient it’s terrible out there. No colours colliding or songs to sing like poems. There’s only darkness like you’re trapped in a bubble, and you look back at what’s really the truth inside.
Prompt- In the flash of lightning I saw
My goal is to do it as the perspective of the hamburger, instead of a person or animal a food.
One day i was lying around a lonely bun with sesame seeds on top. As i could see in the burning, crisping frypan was the burger being flipped constantly, burn up till it’s just right. Then the cheese was being pulled out of processed, chemical added flavour packet, it had a cheesy grin, as it slipped around. And the tomato and lettuce were being chopped up, swirled in a machine and then freshly grated. Then it was time to mix everything into one, a delicious masterpiece, all different tastes and mixtures your taste buds would be nuts. But they hated us, and before being thrown out rotting for what seems like years we were snatched by these papery hands and children were messing around and we started to eat them up.
My goal is to set my story in a historical moment
As the sun set with so many colours joining and birds flashed and fluttered across the river Nile. Once the darkness came within, vast orange shadows spread far and wide across the land. It was the Roman army foraging forward to take the land. Young Cleopatra got all her slaves big and tall, thick and thin. She pointed her finger down into the darkness of Giza to hide her treasures and jewels. She set mazes and traps, she even set a crocodile swamp down in the depths. She was the last remaining emperor, as her kingdom had collapsed in destruction.
Walking down the street, splashing my feet in the water and knocking over the cans while cars squash them. As I walked in the door silence appeared I jumped on each step up to my room, and dumped my bag on the floor. I went on my laptop and started playing games I heard a squeak, from the trap door. I went down and bumped my head and I have a bruise. Then I looked down at the table and there was a cake I tasted it I just couldn’t eat something so disgusting like pepper, socks, and poo.