100 word challenge-It reminded me of the time when

100 word challenge-It reminded me of the time when

Everything just moved so fast as a kid, there was never a time where you could just stop and think and about it all. But it was great I could do whatever I wanted I was like a loose cannon. But everyone has that moment as a child where you can think about it all. But it came to early and it just all hit me. Everything around you just stops and it’s a silent world. It reminded me of the time when she left us, Dad said she was having a long sleep.

2 thoughts on “100 word challenge-It reminded me of the time when

  1. That was great Aaliyah. It was heartfelt and beautiful. I liked the end sentence, so we knew what you were talking about.

  2. I really liked this piece of writing. It sounded like somebody was looking back on their childhood, and the reader could tell by the voice in this piece of writing that the character was sad, and that they would be talking about something that changed their life.

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