100 word challenge- Above

100 word challenge- Above


You see shadows around the corner looking waiting. But what are they, flashing movements, in a blink of an eye you turn and there’s nothing there. Footprints left in the ground, if your lucking you might catch something but only just. You have to make sure it doesn’t find you. Sometimes you hear of missing children well this is where they go. It lurks in the forest, but don’t be out past your bedtime, cause it’s out too. When you hear dogs barking at night, it there waiting watching. So who’s going to be next, maybe you.

One thought on “100 word challenge- Above

  1. Hi Aaliyah,
    What a creepy story! I love the way you build the tension and create a backstory for the legs in the prompt. I wonder what exactly “it” is? Your ending is particularly good for putting the reader on edge- well done! Maybe try adding a few commas to make your sentences easier to read. Keep up the good work!
    Thanks for taking part in 100WC this week.
    Hannah (Team 100) -Birmingham, UK

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