Describing characters in Fiction- My forever home

This is my reflection on describing characters in fiction. Using 5 main points, Physical, Intellectual, Emotional, Social and Philosophical. I’m using the Story my Forever Home by Gail. It was a story about a stray cat who’s trying to find his own place. As he does humans come and create something new. He finds a Family that cares for him and finds his home.

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Physical– The character is a cat. I think he was a stray, probably weak and he described himself as scruffy, dirty and messed up. The physical attributes helps him with daily things. Because cats are good climbs it explains why he was so good at climbing up trees and buildings. He also was probably had good eyesight talking about how he could see the beautiful seaside. I think having this posture for him is very helpful and likes having these skills. You could picture his body type as weak but still bearable at first. After people started feeding him and caring, you would have thought he was healthy and fit. He said that people don’t want someone like him so maybe his hygiene comes into to play and also that he’s a feral animal.

Intellectual– He seems quite smart because he seems to be understanding everything that’s going on with his life and what things are called. He seems to understand others actions and what they’re doing. This character knows a lot about human life, and progress/development in our daily lives. He seemed to be using wow a lot and using a bit of slang. Sometimes how you talk and the way you do it tells your intelligence. He seemed to be a bit below the rest he still understood things but in a different way. The more things he knew about what the humans were doing it was easier for him to act the way he physical attributes could respond. The more new things that happen the more he understands.

Emotional– I think Sammie was very grateful for what he had and that the family took him in. He was very excitable and optimistic in all the situations. He’s like one of those average cats who likes people around him and likes having fun like climbing things. He wasn’t to over the top about things but he just stayed relaxed. He seems pretty happy with where he is in life. When faced with challenges in the story his feelings don’t change, he just stay’s calm.

Social– I think he enjoyed being social with the family and have someone to love him. He did like his own place but wasn’t annoyed by other people being around him. He doesn’t really choose his friends because his friends choose him which are the humans. Being social for him in this story affects where he lives. If he didn’t walk up to the people and be friendly they wouldn’t have given him a home or food.

Philosophical– I think Sammie believes that life is harsh and not everything goes the way you want it to. I think what he believes in is based on what he has experienced himself. Because he knows not everything goes your way he knows that you shouldn’t beg and let things happen. I think he thought at first that everything was going to be perfect all the time but after his experienced he knew that wasn’t the case.

I think I’m like this character I’m adventurous like my personal space sometimes, and I know that not everything goes my way. I think that my Mom and Grandma are like this to.

100 word challenge- Seal Death

One morning I jumped in the water with my pod, all my family and friends were swimming out to get some breakfast. I slapped myself up on my rock and sat there watching my little brother he was just a seal pup. He splashed and swirled around in the water, as he just spinned around in circles. I was laughing hysterically. At that moment he was pulled into the depths of the water. I thought he was just playing a game, but after a few moments it wasn’t a game. I dived into the water as I saw a shadow.

Charles Reflection- 5 Fiction facts

  1. Fiction is all about the character: I think the main character in this story was Laurie. In the story it said this line- He abandoned corduroy overalls with bibs and began wearing blue jeans with a belt and a baseball cap. Laurie is misbehaved, doesn’t listen, rude, disrespectful. He also calls people names and swears. He doesn’t listen to rules and made up his own person, just for himself and his own purposes. His mother found out this weeks after all the incidents.
  2. Fiction is all about what the character wants: I think Laurie wants to feel good about himself because he’s always getting in trouble. I think Laurie made up Charles so he can blame all the things he did on someone else, and so he feels like a good kid.
  3. Fiction is all about how your character gets or does not get what he or she wants: Laurie is both successful and not. What Laurie wants doesn’t change what he wants throughout the story. Laurie succeeds by making up Charles and his parents believing him, and succeeds truly by seeing that and thinking that Charles is bad he thinks that he should be good. But he didn’t succeed because his Mom finds out all that trouble was caused by Laurie at the parent teacher interviews and that Laurie was lying. His obstacles that he has to encounter is his parents, teacher and at home.
  4. Fiction is all about how your character changes: Laurie changes when one day he comes home from school saying that ‘’ Charles’’ was acting good all the time. So that means that Laurie has changed his behaviour at school. Laurie at the start was very rude and physically violent. At the end he was very good and listened. I think that Laurie learned being bad doesn’t change the fact about what you’re doing and different attitudes can make an impact in different ways. THIS IS POSSIBLY THE MOST IMPORTANT FACT BECAUSE IT CONNECTS DIRECTLY TO THE THEME AND MESSAGE!!
  5. Fiction is all about a world an author creates: I think the created the book by making it relatable because a lot of people haven’t done such as bad as things but made mistakes. This world is very similar to ours but probably in another country and a little while back thinking about the clothes, teacher materials and the punishments they used in school times. Some of the places it had where school, home and the classroom. Some people where the parents, baby sister, teacher and students. A lot of things she included where things that we knew so we got a clear image. Some conflicts were Laurie asking another girl to swear and saying it himself and him lying and being violent. Some of the good things in this world were was Laurie had a kind mother and school tried to help him. Some bad things was that the teacher didn’t talk to Laurie’s mother earlier.

This is a world where everything is relatable because it’s all the same and nothing is different.

100 word challenge-Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin

In 1804 in the Streets of England a Young musician died. No one how this came to be. One cold, grim day a little girl Scarlet perched herself down by the Merri dale creek where she sang songs. But that day an old violin case flowed down the stream. She grabbed it and pulled it open. She saw what was inside on a soft, patterned cushion. Was a small little puppy called Daisy, she wasn’t annoying but cute and calm. Scarlet eyes watered in happiness after her family died, she didn’t have anyone, so this was a chance. 

Themes- Steamed Windows

Themes- This story helped me understand a lot of themes and ideas, and showed me a different perspective of how people live their life. Some themes were loneliness, sadness, happiness, friendship, helpfulness, loss. I could most clearly see loss because she loved music, but one day she couldn’t hear and lost a lot of things she loved. She said that she loved singing too, but after she became deaf she couldn’t talk very well.

Important human issues- I think the author wants you to about is not just about deaf people but many people that have disabilities. That we should be open in helping people and providing them care and giving respect to them. And it can happen at any time in life. And people should be helpful and mindful of their loss because it impacts their lives in big ways.

Stories apply to many readers- I think people who would connect to this story would be people who have, people who have someone loved/friend who has it. And people who have other things that stop them from doing things like blindness and being mute (you can’t talk). I think a part that these 2 parts would really connect to people. When Kade helped her and tried his best to communicate, which showed that were all equals. And when she was in hospital she was scared and didn’t know what was happening, until they said she was deaf on the whiteboard.

Events represent ideas- I think some figurative language was when she said, It’s the only thing, if I really, really listen I can sometimes hear it, but it’s quiet, muted. It’s like its playing, softly inside a sound proof room and I’m outside the door, sitting and straining to hear. I think it means that she still has a strong connection to something she lost and she doesn’t forget what she loved. It can kind of shows that we expect things to stay the same after change.


Experiences evolves patterns- Some repeating patterns are her listening to her Mums music and thinking about it. And when Kade and her where drawing on the windows to talk to each other. And saying that she’s deaf she also used her whiteboard a lot.


Fiction is instructional- Its saying don’t take people or things for granted because one thing could be perfect for a long time and change in the blink of an eye.  And it said this, all I know is that one day I was hearing just fine then the next day I woke up in a hospital with a huge headache. I was so scared at first. I saw them talking but I couldn’t hear. Later someone wrote down for me that something had happened to my eardrums and now I was deaf. So we can’t expect they UN expected.


If I was her I’d be super scared and nervous. I’d feel so weird like a different person. I think I’d feel left out because the whole world is talking and I’m just watching things. I feel super lucky to be able to see, talk, and hear everything in my life. It would be so weird I do know some ones grandpa that doesn’t have one ear at all. So be grateful that you can hear at all.

100 word challenge- the flash made me

You know some people are just perfect, but I’m the total opposite from another galaxy. Because it’s school photo day and trust me everybody hates it, you sit down and give a cheesy smile. So my turn once someone spilt juice and another time foam. My turn it’s like stepping onto a podium. My bottom touches the seat softly I put my hands over my lap and smi… but I thought if I try to be bad then I might get it right. But the flash made me flicker and in the end I knocked the camera over and deleted the photos.

Prompt- the flash made me